[tweetmeme source=”jjdanz” only_single=false service=ow.ly] Now you may believe you are so bright, And you may not see how they confine your sight, And maybe you wake up late at night, Wondering why you feel so tired, Well my dear, let me tell you now, Do you hear, It’s only fear, only fear, it’s only fear, […]
[tweetmeme source=”jjdanz” only_single=false service=ow.ly] Been writing? Grab a cup of coffee and take a little break. Sit back and listen to the music. Enjoy little shot of inspirado. You deserve it. [youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdesVXs7lxg] [youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uBaSTozYLdI] [youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=orkQRT8MKho] Mmmm. I believe I’ll have another cup.
Coffee Break: Three Songs You Oughta Hear Read Post »
[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hsAFdZRRAFk] [tweetmeme source=”jjdanz” only_single=false service=ow.ly] Yet more brilliant writing from Cormac McCarthy in cinematic form. McCarthy originally wrote No Country for Old Men as a screenplay, so the dialogue you’ve seen here is pretty much directly from the book. And it’s solid. Beats sit neatly between the lines. Subtext simmers under the spoken words. The
Writing Dialogue That Does Heavy Lifting Read Post »
[tweetmeme source=”jjdanz” only_single=false service=ow.ly] Dig this version of Woodie Guthrie’s Vigilante Man by Ry Cooder. Cooder is probably best remembered these days for his work on the Crossroads soundtrack and The Buena Vista Social Club. I could tell you that he rips it up, but you can watch for yourself. Enjoy the how the tone
Ry Cooder, Tone, and Imagery Read Post »
[tweetmeme source=”jjdanz” only_single=false service=ow.ly] I’m in the process of wrapping up the second of two short stories that I’ve written in between drafts of Shadow of the Black City. With each short story I write, my awareness of things grows and my writing improves. Things blurred in the murk of my peripheral awareness are coming
Writing Short Fiction with an Eye on Long Fiction Read Post »
[tweetmeme source=”jjdanz” only_single=false service=ow.ly] My earlier post about nuance in story, about delving into subtext and abstraction, did little more than scratch the surface. However, it brought me back to the the idea of showing rather than telling. Why? As writers, we hear this edict all the time. Sometimes I have a hard time determining
Finding the Show in Your Writing Read Post »
[tweetmeme source=”jjdanz” only_single=false service=ow.ly] I’ve been enjoying exploring the nuances of story telling, ideas that build on fundamental concepts such as story structure, word and punctuation usage, and writing discipline. Over at Tribal Writer, novelist Justine Musk has offers two great posts (among many, really) on microtension and theme. Both posts underscored my goal for
The Nuance of a Story Read Post »
Take some time, watch this and marvel. (Stolen from Bronx Banter): [youtube=http://www.youtube.com/v/qybUFnY7Y8w&hl=en_US&fs=1&] [tweetmeme source=”jjdanz” only_single=false service=ow.ly] Now, take time to marvel at your WIP or whatever noble task at which you’ve been toiling (Parenting is a good one). You’ve put effort into the details, arranged things just so, and hopefully, when all is said and
You and Rube Goldberg Read Post »
[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yBmqfM74sIY] And it’s slow, so slow the idea, The coming around of a sensible word. It hovers and shakes like a hummingbird wing At the end of a long hot year. Kelly Joe Phelps – Tight to the Jar Mr. Phelps very well captures the essence of writing in the bridge from Tight to the Jar.
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